Oh my....another major improvement >.< Her right (your left) arm needs some depth so you can tell that it's bent, and not just really short >.< Her left arm is a bit crooked....and she seems just a bit off balance from the angles of her feet >.<
Finally....the background needs a bit more lighting work >.< It'll help solidify the entire thing as a scene rather than a character in a fitting background >.<
I love the clothes...and the lighting you did for the character is simply amazing >.<
I love it, and no more critiques from me for another few months >.>
You already know this is absolutely gorgeous the coloring is such a huge step up than any of your previous work. You should be very very proud of your self. <3
But some things you could look into: There are some areas that are less neat and crisp in shading than others. Some proportions are a little off, mainly the left leg that standing out. The scaling proportions and such between the caff and thigh are off and the tilt of her foot n' ankle make her seem like she's starting to top over, from the motion of action you have the foot would be taking the weight all the weight as the other is coming up from behind thus having the foot be firmly placed on the ground. What you have is more tilted on the side of her foot.
Hmmm maybe asides that... maybe your ground breaks up too soon? maybe sharpen the detail some. It kind of messes with the depth and distance between the mid-ground, foreground and the figure.
And maybe add some cast shadowing under her in different places to just to make her stand out more and give it a lil more depth (3Dishness) idk how to explain that.
Hopefully some of this helped.
C: Asides that~ as an overall and a pretty much first for this. It's amazing work!
;> I expect this in all your upcoming drawings/illustrations, now that we know your more extreme capabilities. huhuhu~
Keep up the breathtakingwork bby~ <3
* U * best of luck on the contest too! I'll be rooting for ya!