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Hollowcakes by Girutea Hollowcakes by Girutea
a commission for :iconblueberrygoblin: very cool and cute character who prolly should not be allowed to carry them on a tray since, well hes doing a poor job about it lol

thank you once again for the commisisons i hope you like it and hope you other guys enjoy it c:

and id whats up with the bg lol
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maybe I'm not right for this, but I think your picture is missing something.
however I think it has great style and deserve is a good rating, I can not help but highlight the lack of details of the fund, I'm not as good as you, but I think he ought to know almost everything is good about the character design. in color should I say you need darker colors to give you atmosphere of fear, even if your intention is to give a sweet view of the character. With taste, a fellow of the deviantart page a pleasure help.

I hope that my criticism is useful. :D
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This is only my second critique so bear with me :P

I like the character itself a lot (I'm a sucker for characters with ears) She is very cute and I love the expression on her face. I'm very impressed with how accurate the hand looks (like any artist I struggle with hands and feet) but I think her legs are a little awkward. I know she's suppose to be in motion and maybe even stumbling forward(?) but the right leg being completely flexed up is kind of odd (but I'm picky)

The only complaint (besides the leg thing) Is probably the background. I like the checkerboard underneath but I think all the swirlys and bats sort of distract from the character and things around her (aka muffins, cookies, etc.)

~Sorry it took me so long to critique, but awesome job and I hope I helped a little ^_^
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Krzysiek2222 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
Very great
KatsuAshomi Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So Cute!
eroic Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I really like your technique, and the colors work in harmony. Plus, she looks really cute :)
The thing about this is, the background has a high contrast, while the character has low contrast. So, the eye doesn't look at the character (which is the main part of this piece), but to the background. It's kind of confusing :P Maybe you could make the background lighter and make the shadows of the character darker.
But, overall, I like it.

Sorry about my English.
Demonstrosity4 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
May I have some.... please, it looks delicious...
blueberrygoblin Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahaha, this is amazing. You really captured his personality so well - and no, he probably shouldn't be allowed to carry them on the tray. XD Thank you again! <3
Girutea Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
awww thank you so very much for the comment Im glad I was able to do so and im glad your happy with it,thanks again forthe commission
NekoNinja13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
reminds me of my girlfriend
RiriYuki Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
Ooo I didn't notice the cupcakes before. >w<! Snatch a cookie before it drops to the ground!! Love his apron~
Silente93 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student General Artist
mmm its so great.......
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