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BlueWater by Girutea BlueWater by Girutea
E u E I really really need the money lol

hummmm though its an interesting idea for a late nighter , but ill prolly do some more once I get any more watery idea E uE

hopeyou guys like it

its a little simplistic realism combined with lineless

*will be editing this alot
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Shingoart Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010   Interface Designer
U W
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Shingoart Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2010   Interface Designer
hell yeah :D
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hermesma Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
i love it! i think it s my favourite!
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ninjakittypoo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pretty :3
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Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
thanks
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Shingoart Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010   Interface Designer
PLEASE I WANNA SOME HELP ABOUT LOGO CAN I CREAT MY OWN ART WATER LOGO OR I SHOULD USE THE ORIGINAL LOGO IF YES WHEN CQN I FOUND IT PLEASE ???
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010
I dont even know wheres the logo is
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Shingoart Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2010   Interface Designer
okay no problem im gona create my owne dont forget to take a look of my design
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1pencilTHIEF Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
COOOOL even as a pun
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010
lolol yupyup thanks
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AC730 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010  Student Digital Artist
This is really a great concept for a water bottle . However if you're quite serious about the competition I have some suggestions you might want to consider. I'm not going to say how good it looks because I'm sure hundreds of others before me have already said that.

It's true that the purpose of this task is to express yourself on the bottle, however a bottle being sold is still a commercial product. It will catch the assessors or judges eyes more if you actually added the proper logo or come up with something that looks like a completed bottle. You will need to add contrast to the logo to make it reestablish its hierarchy or you will regret it having it there. From my point of view, due to the monochromatic nature of this image, contrast it by color to make it stand out. Not only will it attract eyes to it more but it can potentially boost the visual interest even more. I've seen plenty of blue bottles there, all monochromatic, no contrast.

Then if you think you've something down, print it out and stick it on a bottle and place it next to others in your local shop. The context sometimes matters.

Why?

This is because the assessors or judges will have to do less imagining and more considering of the likelihood. It will also give them more of a chance to contemplate how to edit this further instead of thinking about the logo placements and all that jazz; then come to realize it didn't work out like they thought. Just a psychological strategy.

Also, since you actually did try to do a logo up there, it is extremely murky and very unclear to the eye. In fact it's actually very displeasing to the eye due to the fact one is unable to see what the words represent clearly. The white blurred parts cover up too much of the logo there also.

Now since you've expressed you're interest in making this better and watery effects, I suggest you increase the contrast on the gradient to transparency so the when people see the bottle they won't confuse color of the drink with the label. The texture of the person or object appears to be matte and a bit dull. They do look spherical in some areas, but if you allow the opacity to decrease and add white highlights you can make them appear more fluid. Another is the use of white highlights, you have none at all. This can increase the 'shine' or reflection within the image itself and increase the similarities to the texture of water.

Finally, I just want to say if you are considering making more designs don't scrap this one. Sometimes the first time you work out something its usually the most correct one (just in case). And that it's really good as it is. But if you want it on a professional level, try some of the suggestions out. I'm not ordering you to do so but from an audience stand point I know I'd want to see something standing out and like a water bottle with an expressive attitude.

Good luck! (Do tell me if some of my suggestions are wrong in its purpose).
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foxgguy2001 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I agree :typerhappy:

This really is a wonderful critique...wonderful thoughts and suggestions...bravo!
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:iconac730:
AC730 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I really don't critique much, but thanks!
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010
alright ill take these into consideration E uE


gunna be hard to edit though

so maybe a new similar one
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:iconac730:
AC730 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Looking forward to it then!
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Baranha Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is a great critique, good job AC730.
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:iconac730:
AC730 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I never thought I'd get praise for a critique... LOL. Thanks!
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Baranha Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome
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crayon2918 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thats very cool try to make same as your lol ^_^
Nice Work brother :)
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Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010
lolol good luck with that though o u ob
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dango21192 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010
lol most popular for digital entrys... ... wow!
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010
cuz its that good o u ob
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dango21192 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010
so true!
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minapuki Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
damn
i'd chug the water and then put the bottle as decoration for my room
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
o0o0o why not get multiple ones and make a mural
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ksagag Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010  Professional General Artist
Gorgeous. I would buy the water bottle just for the design! Good luck!
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
'awwww thank you so much * u *
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Kirinjinx Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010   Photographer
Amazing. The best work for this contest so far. You're going to win it!
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
Awww thank you oh so very much * u* I hope my next one is better than this
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DASwitchNow Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
Vry pretty ^ ^
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
thanks
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DASwitchNow Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
No prob ^ ^
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SilverShadow1711 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
If this doesn't win, there is no God. I mean, seriously! I'd feel bad putting that on a water bottle- it belongs in an art gallery.
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Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
LOLOL why thank

and why not both ;D

or even have the bottles arranged to make the set piece
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SilverShadow1711 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010
I'd buy 'em. I'd buy the hell out of them.
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x-riceball-x Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
sighh...you're totally gonna win!!!!! i don't stand a chance...sighh
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
* u* why thank you

and lol dont give up yo
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x-riceball-x Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010
no really i don't stand a chance...i'm not old enough....grrrrr.....
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010
*patpat this is the first age restricted contest ive seen lol
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x-riceball-x Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010
really?! there's a lot more...makes me mad!
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etched-in-dust Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
This is beautiful ^_^
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
thanks
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MaoKurai Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
i would drink from that bottle withouth a second thought :la:
hope you win
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010
iohoh thank you soo much E uE
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Cevkarade Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
Cool blue design
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