A Contrast in Progress

now I know I dont do much WIP but heres one for your utmost fancy, this one is meant to be so early in the stage that you can critique w/o wrryin too much on how much time I spent aahaha

So I really want you to critique for a contest I'm still in =]

the composition is a symmetrical
its also a diamond as in the floor plans and a circle arounf the diamon as in the wings and a middle ground of attention as in the girl plus her light to make it center since shes to a side


hopefully this shows some contrast between the characters red and blue or black and white