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A Contrast in Progress by Girutea A Contrast in Progress by Girutea
now I know I dont do much WIP but heres one for your utmost fancy, this one is meant to be so early in the stage that you can critique w/o wrryin too much on how much time I spent aahaha

So I really want you to critique for a contest I'm still in =]

the composition is a symmetrical
its also a diamond as in the floor plans and a circle arounf the diamon as in the wings and a middle ground of attention as in the girl plus her light to make it center since shes to a side


hopefully this shows some contrast between the characters red and blue or black and white
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:iconsantuary:
santuary Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So beautiful...
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009
Aww thank you, hopefully I can make it alot better =]
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XxTheHeavyHeartsxX Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
Ahhh that looks awesome! : D
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
thanks you so mucho
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:iconmewmewkitty4457:
mewmewkitty4457 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
WOW i really really really really love this guilty its really amazing!!!
(did i say really enough??? lol)
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
ahah you cant have enough reallies ajaja
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:iconmewmewkitty4457:
mewmewkitty4457 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
teehee really??
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:iconelsevilla:
elsevilla Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
looking nice so far
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
thank you, I'll just go on from here
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:icondesert--mirage:
Desert--Mirage Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
Very nice
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
Thanks you, good to hear from you =]
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TrollStoleMyName Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
A lovely Compistion of two charictors With almost every Cell in their bodys being polar opisites Somehow they seem to fit perfectly

Being Completely Critical I mean over-the-top-super-Im trying-to-crush-your-hopes-and-dreams critical the connection between the two charictors is sort of bland this may have been the point,there may not even be a connection Im just pointing it out.

the piece itself is buetiful Organic/Goemetric Tonal Personality Make up are all opposing truth to the Pharse "oppisites attract"
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
Ahahah well if you had to be that critical then that means that once it finished it would be a lot better since you had to go that far ahahahah


ahah its what I had in mind C=
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TrollStoleMyName Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
OK figured out after I typededed it that it was probily not acceidental

Great peiece please Pwease finnish PWEASE
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Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
ahah I will, although waiting for a super guyr with great composition critiquing abilities ahahah and then will have to wait for the next round to start [for a contest that partakes in rounds, and they just finished judging them so once we get those things cleared then submitting will be available =]
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TrollStoleMyName Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
Intersting well good luck :#1:
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Electric-Eccentric Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Never seen somebody post a CIP before. :XD:
"Your mom goes to college"-Kip

Anyway...I think it's kinda hard to critique in this early stage. Your lines are a little sketchy right now, and there's a good amount of detail. But you always handle the details well, and I'm sure you'll do an amazing job of coloring it like you always do. :)

And I think the contrast between the characters is pretty clear, just from the lines. His clothes, wings and hair are all more angular in comparison to hers. Her wings are more soft-ish, and her body is more curvy.

So overall, at this point, it looks good. The contrast is evident even from your sketch. As long as you do your usual quality(or better) of coloring, this'll be one heck of a piece, in my opinion. :)
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
ahahah well as long as its an ok from here ahah =]
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:iconelectric-eccentric:
Electric-Eccentric Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can't wait to see it finished. :D
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gloomynekochan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
I really enjoy the character designs. They're uber lovely. I'd offer a critique but it's such an early stage of work I'm not sure of what to really make of it.
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Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
hmmm well if you cant find something to critique, then that means I'm not making a horrible mistake so early on ahahah, although do you think its composition is okay for a theme of contrast and a little bit of symmetry too =]
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gloomynekochan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
the composition is very eye-catching i must say. I'm looking forward to seeing how the lighting is going to be when fully fleshed out.
just make sure to have uberly sharp lighting if you're going for contrast.

ummmm!! gah i can't think of things ;A; brain fart.
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
ahaha thank you very much, I'll take those things into my consideration, I think I know some options in photshop that may help too =]
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:icongloomynekochan:
gloomynekochan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
you're very welcome. :3
i'm looking forward to the final product : D
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:icongirutea:
Girutea Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
Aww thanks you , I think you'll see it eventually ahahah
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